Revenge For Blood

That night was full of blood and tears. The war between those two families had come to an end at last. Even though that the war had ended, the feeling of hatred was still prevail. The desire to avenge his father’s death has become a part to his heart and he made a promise to himself, he will kill the killer of his father and claim back the title that they should have. Day passes to week and months changing to year, everybody seems to forget the tragedy between those two families.

note : guys! what do you think about the opening. Do you think I should continue it?